Technology Exploration Project – M591
Summary of M591 Coursework Article 2
Academic Year 2007/8
Highlights of the articles are:
- Many articles contained some form of primary research.
- The writing techniques had less grammatical errors.
Areas that need improvements are:
- Articles should follow the experimental and research evidence to a stronger conclusion.
- Structure of the articles still need improvement to support the article thesis.
- Article content should be supported using a wider variety of secondary research sources.
The following are
provisional marks subject to approval at the Unit Assessment Board. The coursework assignment
is available online.
| Encoded Student Number | Critical analysis and reflection | Evidence of research | Writing mechanics |
| 42dcb123e7e32afb5467ad33542b7142 | 39.00 | 26.00 | 15.00 |
| 43b13d89a958bfb22a1c9cc36ee602ee | 39.00 | 25.00 | 15.00 |
| 204df5af967674e04c5dc6073a301e28 | 38.00 | 24.00 | 17.00 |
| ee325de032571f24e30faf3f8ed60b29 | 36.00 | 24.00 | 17.00 |
| 63dc80c01fc6b81cdec29de2d90a1a43 | 35.00 | 22.00 | 15.00 |
| 66c3871cced16ac8ca562f8961a7eed4 | 36.00 | 22.00 | 14.00 |
| 4696b11a984af86438579f177ccf20c5 | 35.00 | 21.00 | 15.00 |
| 3e5ab8f3ce28d7167974ba973cfce161 | 35.00 | 22.00 | 14.00 |
| ba967806f7c430a5b05c59a36a87ed07 | 35.00 | 18.00 | 13.00 |
